2014年4月2日 星期三

Liberal studies not suitable as core subject


I refer to the article by Linda Yeung ("Core of the problem", March 3). I think that liberal studies should be an elective (rather than a core) subject in schools.
Secondary students are not familiar with the subject. Before it was introduced, they did general studies.
Many therefore have difficulty dealing with the questions that are asked in exams, even if they watch more news programmes and try to have a deeper understanding of current affairs.
Also, I do not think there are enough experienced liberal studies teachers in Hong Kong. Most of them have not had experience of teaching this kind of course and it shows. And they need to teach two subjects in schools. Some have been given very little time to acquire the skills needed to organise a course effectively.
This means they are of little help to 不太幫助到those students who are having difficulty getting to grips with the subject. 對掌握科目感到困難. [come/get to grips with sth 掌握]
I also feel that liberal studies is too subjective. Each teacher has his, or her, own views on a particular question on a topic.
This issue of subjectivity can cause problems when different teachers are marking answers in the Diploma of Secondary Education exam paper. It means that for the students, there is not really a level playing field.沒有一個公平的競爭環境.
Officials need to think carefully about whether it should be an elective or core subject.
Lisa Chung Lai-yan, Tiu Keng Leng



Liberal studies too subjective for core topic
I refer to the letter by Lisa Chung Lai-yan ("Liberal studies not suitable as core subject", March 8).
As a secondary student, I absolutely agree that liberal studies should be an elective subject rather than a core part of the curriculum in schools.
It is said practice makes perfect, but there are no standard answers in this subject. Students cannot be sure of high marks even if they practise tests a lot, since there are no model answers to offer guidance.
According to the Hong Kong Examinations and Assessment Authority, only 7.8 per cent of candidates in 2013 could get level 5 or above, the lowest percentage among core subjects.
Liberal studies has been a core subject since 2009. I do not think the government has provided enough training for teachers of the subject.
There is no liberal studies degree, so at best 最多只是 they will have studied social sciences at university. Teachers cannot transfer their knowledge to students accurately if they lack training.
In the school-based assessment students are assessed by their teachers. The marks awarded count towards 計落their results in the Diploma of Secondary Education.

( count towards: to be part of what is needed to complete or achieve something:
The work that the students do during the year will count towards their final degrees.)
In liberal studies, the assessment is called independent enquiry study.
Students need to research a lot of material, which places a heavy burden 造成沉重壓力 on them, mentally and physically.

[ to study a subject in detailespecially in order to discover new information orreach a new understanding:
She's researching into possible cures for AIDS.Journalists were frantically researching the new prime minister's background, family, and interests.]
People have different points of view, making liberal studies subjective and difficult to mark exam papers fairly.
反對通識作為主科的arguements:

1. teachers have different points of view. subjective marking.
2. teachers lack training; no experience
3. heavy burden, particularly the independent enquiry study
4. easy to pass but difficult to get high marks ( only 7.8 per cent of candidates in 2013 could get level 5 or above)


仆街政府遺害眾學子.

news report:

Education Bureau puts liberal studies under the microscope

Educators are divided over 在教育界人士之間出現分歧 the effectiveness of liberal studies being taught as a mandatory subject(=core subject) in local secondary schools. Linda Yeung found students also had strong opinions on the subject

Terence Poon (above), a liberal studies teacher at De La Salle Secondary School, believes keeping the subject as a core one will broaden students' horizons. Photo: Edmond So

A jovial 愉快的 atmosphere prevailed in the classroom as groups of senior form students took on adult roles as directors of a company debating where they should set up a regional base - Hong Kong or Shanghai. In turn, they argued their case before the audience of fellow students acting as company shareholders.
The students appeared to enjoy the role play in the liberal studies class at De La Salle Secondary School.
Nobody would choose [liberal studies] if it were an elective subject
BETTY KUI, FORM SIX STUDENT
A core subject in the senior secondary curriculum launched in 2009, liberal studies is intended to broaden the mindsets of students and encourage them to put on their thinking caps. But it has remained controversial, being blamed for exacerbating the workload of both students and teachers.
Many have also cast doubt over its effectiveness in fostering critical thinking.
As part of a mid-term review of the new curriculum, the Education Bureau is seeking views from schools and other stakeholders on improving the subject's curriculum and assessment methods.
Students have griped about the extra work needed for the independent enquiry study (IES), an extensive research endeavour that includes a 1,500- to 4,000-word research essay for the school-based assessment of the subject. Some want liberal studies to be an elective, not a core subject.
"Nobody would choose it if it were an elective subject," says Betty Kui, a Form Six student. "Its content is too broad. The IES just made you exhausted. We were supposed to get individual guidance from teachers, but there was not enough time for them to discuss the projects with each student in class. Often I could not find them after school and I ended up doing it mostly on my own."
The bureau is due to make recommendations on refining the IES this July and on liberal studies by July next year.
Judging from responses so far, the IES will most likely be further simplified and the weighting in students' final grades reduced.
Lee Suet-ying, chairman of the Hong Kong Association of the Heads of Secondary Schools, notes the gap between the ability of students and the demands put on them by the research exercise.
"About half of the students at an average school cannot handle it. They have to formulate their own inquiry-based topic, research scope and research method," she says.
"What is being asked for is university level, not what a Form Four or Five student can handle."
But she does favour retaining the subject in the core curriculum as it exposes students to topical issues under the six prescribed預定的 modules: personal development and interpersonal relationships; Hong Kong today; modern China; globalisation; energy, technology and the environment; and public health.
"There is room to cultivate critical thinking. Students today pay more attention to newspaper reports. They all know about the Occupy Central movement, for example.
"No major [events] have happened since the subject was introduced so there is no good reason to go backwards."
Terence Poon Man-yiu, a liberal studies teacher at De La Salle Secondary School, agrees. "When I was in school, I did not know as much about current affairs as students today. Keeping it as a core subject helps broaden students' horizons and nurture students' critical thinking."
But views are split on how effective it is in achieving that goal. A liberal studies teacher who asked not to be named is highly sceptical, given the proliferation of courses and so-called star liberal studies tutors at tutorial schools.
"They teach model answers and it is easy for them to guess what topics are likely to be featured in the public exam. They are likely to be hot topics. Hong Kong is the only place in the whole world with this subject called LS."
He also questions the professionalism of those teaching the subject. The teachers come from various disciplines and often simply took up the subject at the request of their principal.
"You can be a geography or biology major. Not all are capable of leading discussions or research projects."
He thinks the subject should be an elective. "For students' well-being, they should be given the freedom to choose to take it or not."
Fifteen-year-old Joy Pamnani, who is studying at a local school, says many teachers make students follow a particular writing style or stick to model answers. "And most students do so because they are scared they will be penalised in terms of marks if they don't. This defeats the whole purpose of liberal studies. If we are learning to express our opinions, why should we follow model answers?"
Jessie Pang Yu-tung, a Form Six student, says many teachers and students focus more on acquiring the skills necessary to answer exam questions than on discussing current affairs. "It would be better if LS was more coursework-based than exam-based."
Poon maintains there are no model answers and students are simply expected to provide reasoning for their answers.
To ensure fairness, examiner meetings are held before the grading of the papers in schools and by the Hong Kong Examinations and Assessment Authority for the Hong Kong Diploma of Secondary Education examination.
"Students need to show they have a clear stance on an issue. Those who only memorise views will not get a good grade."
Poon says teachers without a social science background can gain an understanding of various issues by taking part in joint lesson preparations.
Tsang Sui-ming, a liberal studies teacher and spokesman for the Education Concern Group, supports a review of the subject to explore how best to develop civic-mindedness and independent thinking in students.
"It serves the important value of developing civic qualities which are indispensable for democracies," Tsang says.
"Civic education is weak here and students tend to know little about the outside world. But the scope of the subject can be narrowed down. An unhealthy aspect of our education system is that it is examination-oriented and drillings are common. We can explore whether liberal studies has to be exam-based," he says.
One possibility, he suggests, is to model it on the International Baccalaureate Diploma Programme where students submit an essay on a topic before graduation.
Together with liberal studies, one goal of the new senior secondary curriculum is to broaden students' knowledge base. Whether that is happening is also being studied by the bureau. With an emphasis on core subjects, the response may be negative.
"We can't say their learning scope is broadened when most students take two electives on top of four core subjects.
"Schools need to make sure they get good results in the core subjects for the purpose of university admission as universities give limited recognition to students' other learning experiences," says principal Lee.

Link: http://www.scmp.com/lifestyle/family-education/article/1437231/education-bureau-puts-liberal-studies-under-microscope

arguments for LS
1. broaden horizons
2. cultivate critical thinking
3. exposes students to topical issues under the six prescribed預定的 modules
4. developing civic qualities which are indispensable for democracies

過左火, 疏離

Smartphone addiction has gone too far,過火
I am concerned about the overuse of smartphones in Hong Kong.
Smartphone technology has made rapid progress and they are very convenient, especially with the different games and various social networking apps.
However, there is a downside if they are overused. They can lead to estrangement 疏離 due to the loss of face-to-face communication.
They can also cause neck pain if people spend too much time bent over the screen.
Of course there are bigger social problems that our government has to deal with, but the difficulties that can be caused by overuse of these phones should not be ignored. A government advert[用advert, 替advertisement] could be broadcast warning people to take care. We must be aware that smartphone addiction could become a problem.
Krystal Ng Wing-lam, Ma On Shan


advantages:
1. convenient
2. fun, eg. games,various social networking apps

disadvantages:
1. cause estrangement, loss of face to face commun
2.health problems

徒勞無功, 做SHOW, 達到個人目標

呢條白痴寫啲咁低能的信SCMP都要登.

Confrontation with Beijing is simply futile 徒勞無功
I am worried about how young people in Hong Kong and Taiwan are reacting to the stress caused by tougher competition from a rising mainland China.
Some of them take to the streets. It seems they want to protest against anything related to the mainland, instead of trying to take advantage of the opportunities that are now available to them.
Radical politicians and elements of the media do not help matters. In fact they try and take advantage of these protests to pursue their own agenda. 佢認為反對派係利用這些示威來達到個人目標. 
A rising China means that we should be trying to connect and do more business with the mainland.
At the same time as recognising the importance of China and Putonghua globally, Hongkongers still need to stand firm in defence of our core values such as freedom of speech and respect for law and order.
As for the development of democracy, Asia, including Hong Kong, is still on a learning curve. If a radical, confrontational stand is taken on this when talking to Beijing, will we achieve the end result we wish for?
Would it not be better for everyone, including our politicians, to seek to keep the lines of communication open in an attempt to reach a consensus? Surely that is better than grandstanding in front of the cameras? 即做SHOW.
What we need from Beijing is an assurance that it will respect and honour its commitments enshrined in "one country, two systems".
We need our local leaders and the media to be positive and objective when dealing with the mainland.
Some sections of the media and politicians have failed to recognise the importance of objectivity which is why we have a divided Hong Kong.
I do not want to see our younger generation inheriting a city that has been damaged by current political strife.
Can we blame business leaders such as Li Ka-shing for choosing to invest some of their money elsewhere?
We have to accept that we are now part of China, the home of the ancestors of 98 per cent of Hong Kong's population.
We must learn the lessons of history and not allow second-rate politicians, who call themselves democrats, to lead us down a destructive path.
S. Yam, North Point

呢條友想做奴婢。原因:1. China is rising 2. The political party has their own agenda. 



批評

Misleading statistics on incinerator

I read with amusement the letter by Darren Tang of Tai Po ("Swift action needed over incinerator", March 27), accusing Lantau people of being nimbys 鄰避症候群(英语:Not In My Back Yard,NIMBY),或稱邻避综合征 (not in my backyard) for not wanting an incinerator on their doorstep.

This incinerator is of course not a nimby issue - it affects every person and every taxpayer in Hong Kong. Many of your columnists have already pointed out that the Environmental Protection Department has faked recycling rates for years, and has totally failed in any recycling and waste management plan.

The department's attempt to grab public billions for the quick fix of a huge unnecessary incinerator affects all taxpayers, and despite the department's misleading figures in the environmental impact assessment about wind direction, the pollution from the proposed incinerator will affect everyone - even people in Tai Po.

But what does amuse me is that people who start abusing others with accusations of nimby-ism always live as far away as possible from the site in question (Tai Po, for example).

Might I suggest that we coin a new pejorative term to lambast (also lambaste to criticize someone or something severely:His first novel was well and truly lambasted by the critics. )people like Mr Tang? People like him are clearly "pisebys" - preferably in someone else's backyard.

R. E. J. Bunker, Lantau



http://www.scmp.com/comment/letters/article/1462008/letters-editor-april-1-2014

廚餘回收計劃

Food waste is not just an environmental issue, it is also a social one.
We have to ask whether a food waste recycling scheme will be enough to tackle the root of the problem.
Although recycling is a better option than disposal at one of Hong Kong's landfill sites, it still does not address the problem.
It is because of citizens' lack of awareness that huge volumes of food waste are generated.
Rather than just promoting recycling or imposing a waste charge, people have to change their attitudes. They have to recognise the disadvantages of excessive consumerism and realise food is something that should be valued and waste avoided.
Leung Kit-yan, Diamond Hill
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problem: food waste, food disposal 
casues: excessive consumerism, lack of awareness
solution: food recycling scheme, education 



假藥

Bureau can restore faith in mainland food

I welcome the decision of the central government to set up an organisation to probe cases of tainted food and counterfeit drugs on the mainland ("Task force targets fake food, drugs", March 30).

The government has done the right thing to establish the Drug Crimes Investigation Bureau to investigate alleged cases and it can bring a lot of benefits.

It will offer greater protection to citizens, given that previous scandals have led to some citizens falling ill when they consumed tainted food.

If the new organisation can deal effectively with this problem then I hope we will no longer see a repeat of these tragedies which have sometimes led to fatalities.

It will also improve China's image internationally.

These scandals of tainted food and other faulty and dangerous products have damaged its reputation.

It has led to many consumers on the mainland and abroad no longer trusting products from China and refusing to purchase them.

If the bureau successfully targets rogue manufacturers then, hopefully, trust in products from the mainland can be restored.

I do hope this bureau will actually succeed in its brief and that, through its investigations, the tainted food problem on the mainland will be dealt with.

Nadia Lam, Tsim Sha Tsui

問題: reputation of Chinese food, lack of trust in products from mainland 
causes:t tainted food, counterfeit drugs
solution: set up the Drug Crimes Investigation Bureau to investigate/probe alleged case









英文句構特徵1: 主詞受詞名詞化

首先看這句英文句子:The rapid growth of the numbers of Chinese judges in the SLW family reflects the SLW’s contribution to the development of Chines judiciary.

再看中文句子:「加入法律學院大家庭的中國法官人數的迅速增長,反映我院對中國司法界的發展所作的貢獻。」

大家覺得中文是否怪怪的?

為什麼?因為英文的一個特徵,是不屬於中文的,就是名詞化一切!

一切包括:主詞、受詞,和動詞。這篇文章先談第主詞和受詞。

中文的主詞或受詞不會侷限於名詞,可以是短句,即英文的S+V+O句構,但英文的主詞一定是名詞。所以,英文將所有即使是動作的主詞,全都名詞化,使之符合英文句子結構。

余光中有篇文章叫〈怎樣改進英式中文?──論中文的常態與變態〉。他提到:

中文常用一件事情 (一個短句做主詞,英文則常用一個名詞 (或名詞片語)橫貫公路再度坍方,是今日的頭條新聞,是中文的說法。橫貫公路的再度坍方,是今日的頭條新聞,就是英文語法的流露了。同理, 購書籍,只好委託你了是中文語法。書籍的選購,只好委託你了卻是略帶西化。推行國語,要靠大家努力是自然的說法。推行的國語,要靠大家的努 卻嫌冗贅。這種情形也可見於受詞。例如他們杯葛這種風俗的繼續,便是一句可怕的話。無論如何,杯葛繼續總嫌生硬。如果改成他們反對保存這種 風俗,就自然多了。


余光中二十年前已指出了問題,但今日從事翻譯的人仍錯漏百出,原因都是一句,社會不重視翻譯,翻譯人員搵唔到食。

英文句構特徵2:動詞弱化

當中國人寫英文句子,總是脫不掉那種中國味,只因中國句子結構跟英文句構不同。我對上一篇說了英文的主詞受詞愛名詞化,另外英文的動詞也是名詞化。

舉個例子,中文說「犯錯」、「進步」、「嘈吵」、「決定」、「煮晚飯」、「交友」、「賺錢」,都是不同的詞語,但在英文中,他們都有相同之處,是什麼?

原來英語的動詞經常的結構都不純是一個動詞,而是「動詞加名詞」來表達;而以上的中文動詞,在英文中都用同一個動詞來表達:make;分別只在make後的名詞:「犯錯」是make a mistake;「進步」是make a progress;「嘈吵」是make a noise;「決定」是make a decision;「煮晚飯」是make dinner;「交友」是make friends;「賺錢」是make money。因此英語裡有所謂的百搭動詞,因為在英語裡,動詞根本不重要,名詞才是一切。

其他百搭動詞包括:take, do, have等。這留待日後再介紹,因為我想再說另一點。

英語這種「百搭動詞+名詞」結構,導致中文出現很多英式中文;這種英式中文,雖然係用中文寫的,但卻用了英語這種「百搭動詞+名詞」結構,因此湧現了大量冗詞。讓我再次引用余光中的名作〈怎樣改進英式中文?──論中文的常態與變態〉的一段:

「英文好用抽象名詞,其結果是軟化了動詞,也可以說是架空了動詞。科學、社會科學與公文的用語,大舉侵入了日常生活,逼得許多明確而有力動詞漸漸變質,成為面無表情的片語。下面是幾個常見的例子:

  apply pressure: press
  give authorization: permit
  send a communication: write
  take appropriate action: act

在前例之中,簡潔的單音節動詞都變成了含有抽象名詞的片詞,表面上看來,顯得比較堂皇而高級。例如 press 變成了 apply pressure,動作便一分為二,一半馴化為靜止的抽象名詞 pressure,一半淡化為廣泛而籠統的動詞 apply。巴仁 (Jacques Barzun) 與屈林 (Lionel Trilling) 等學者把這類廣泛的動詞叫做「弱動詞」(weak verb)。他們說:「科學報告不免單調而冷淡,影響之餘,現代的文體喜歡把思路分解成一串靜止的概念,用介詞和通常是被動語氣的弱動詞連接起來。」

    巴仁所謂的弱動詞,相當於英國小說家歐威爾所謂的「文字的義肢」(verbal false limb) 。當代的中文也已呈現這種病態,喜歡把簡單明瞭的動詞分解成「萬能動詞+抽象名詞」的片詞。目前最流行的萬能動詞,是「作出」和「進行」,惡勢力之大,幾 乎要吃掉一半的正規動詞。請看下面的例子:

  (本校的校友對社會作出了重大的貢獻。
  (昨晚的聽眾對訪問教授作出了十分熱烈的反應。
  (我們對國際貿易的問題已經進行了詳細的研究。
  (心理學家在老鼠的身上進行試驗。

不管是直接或間接的影響,這樣的語法都是日漸西化的現象,因為中文原有的動詞都分解成上述的繁瑣片語了。前面的四句話本來可以分別說成

  (本校的校友對社會貢獻很大。
  (昨晚的聽眾對訪問教授反應十分熱烈。
  (我們對國際貿易的問題已經詳加研究。
  (心理學家用老鼠來做試驗。(或:心理學家用老鼠試驗。)



英文省略句

中文句子一個特色,就是其經常缺主詞或受詞,例如:「不在沉默中爆发,就在沉默中滅亡」譯為英文時,需要補上主詞,Unless we burst out, we shall perish in this silence

但英文是否一定有主語呢?很多人會立即出祈使句的例子,如Keep SilentThank you等。但除此以外,其實在對話中,英文常常都是不完整句子,或正確點說,是省略句子,可省的部份包括主詞、受詞、及謂語:

第一,省略主詞:Want a cigarette?  (要煙嗎?)省略了Do you
第二,省略受詞。問:Do you know where he is? : NO, I don’t know.省略了受詞where he is
第三,省略動詞。問:Tired? (疲倦嗎?) 省略了Are you

不過,始終除口語外,大部份情況英文也是要有主詞的,這是因為「英语是主语显著语(subject-prominent language),句子都构建在主谓轴(subject-predicate pivot)上,因而主语在句子中不可或缺;而汉语是语义性语言,其主语的重要性相对较低,无主语的现象比比皆是」。(參:英语翻译十大原则http://www.joyen.net/article/other/1/201010/3427.html 

(筆者註:大陸稱主詞為主語,受詞為賓語,我本人愛用台灣的文法叫法。)


如果老師說你的英文結構不完整,你說你在寫對話好了!

英文句構特徵3-再談名詞化

談到英文句型,我一直想推薦一本由台灣的郭岱宗博士寫的一本叫《翻譯大師教你寫出好句子》的書,因為這本書啟發了我對中英句子的分別之認識。

其實整本書的缺點是只是重覆例子和練習,卻不教人方法和原理。另外,有網友也批評了作者的一些句子錯誤。(參看:<郭岱宗教授,你的「好句子」和我的不一樣?!-評「翻譯大師教你寫出好句子(前一百頁)」>─http://scottiiie.blogspot.hk/2009/06/blog-post_27.html)這位仁兄相當不客氣,但他的確指出了作者在winalert的用法上的錯。)

但即使如此,我仍然要說,作者的書雖然寫得爛,但她表達的句子轉化方法,對我們中國人在英語句子結構學習上有很大的啟發。

這個方法便是我在早前提過的「名詞化」(nominalization)

我用這本書封面的句子來舉例:

He doesn't like to be late, which makes many people trust him.

名詞化成:His punctuality wins people's trust.

關鍵就是,將句子大部分的信息擠進主詞部分 (Nominalized sentences pack much of their information into the subject position)

又例如:She is so beautiful that no one can compare with her, and all those who see her are deeply attracted by her.

名詞化成:Her incomparable beauty fascinates everyone.

大家可留意到,原句就是有很重中文味道的句構,而名詞化了的句子則是地道自然的英文句構,而且很正式(formal)

其實正如我之前提過的,英語句子名詞化的不單是主詞,還有受詞部分,例如:The police investigated the matter. 轉化成:The police conducted an investigation into the matter. 其中,investigate這動詞被弱化成conduct,而主要信息則包含在受詞investigation中。


郭博士這本書還是值得參考!

英文作文就是詞性轉換1:中文動詞轉英文名詞

英語之所以名詞化,是因為英文比中文用少很多動詞。英文句子的謂語,即動詞部份應佔句子結構一少部分的。因為中文用太多動詞,因此用英文作句時要刻意提醒自己名詞化本身中文用動詞的部分。當然中文動詞名詞化只是減少動詞的一種手段,另外其實也會用動名詞、介詞、不定詞、分詞等代替動詞,以減少英文句子的動詞。因此,才有我早前一篇寫的,所謂高分英文作文要有的五種句型:倒裝、分詞、關係子句、介詞詞組、和同位語,目的終歸也是減少英文的動詞。

因此當我們做英文作文時,在腦中要不斷轉換詞性。由於我們是中國人,擁有中國思維,句子的組成難免是中文的。為寫出真正的英文句子,必須要不斷做詞性轉換。

如這個部落所言:「按照英语句法,每个句子中只能有一个谓语动词(包括并列谓语动词的情况),因此动词名词化和动名词的使用是很普遍的。而在汉语中就没有一个句子中只能使用一个动词的限制,因此在汉语中动词出现的频率要高于英语。」(http://www.yingyudaxue.com/book/transferring-translate

其實名詞化只是詞性轉換的一種,最常見是中文動詞轉英文名詞,即「你必須好好地照顧病人」譯為: You must take good care of the patients. 中文的名詞「照顧」轉換為英文名詞”care”;而中文副詞「好好地」,變成形容詞”good”。

又如:「絶對不許違反這些原則」可翻為:No violation of these principles can be tolerated.

林則徐認為,要成功地禁止鴉片買賣,就得首先把鴉片焚燬。翻譯是:Lin Zexu believed that a successful ban of opium trade must be preceded by the destruction of opium.

发言人相继表示要打倒帝国主义,消灭人剥削人的制度,解放全世界被压迫的人民。譯成英文是:One after another, speakers called for the downfall of imperialism, abolition of exploitation of man by man, liberation of the oppressed of the world.



英文作文就是詞性轉換2: 中文形容詞轉英文名詞


除了將中文的動詞改為英文的名詞外,還有將中文形容詞轉英文名詞。例子:「思想交流是十分必要的」譯為中文變成:Exchange of ideas is a vital necessity. 形容詞「必要的」變成英文名詞a vital necessity.

「我們覺得解決這問題並不難」,翻譯是:We found no difficulty in solving this problem. 中文原句的形容詞「難」譯為英文的名詞difficulty.

另外,中文副詞也可轉換為英文的名詞,如「共產黨員應該吃苦在前,享受在後」可譯為: Communists should be the first to bear hardship and the last to enjoy comforts. 中文的在前和在後是副詞,譯成英文變名詞。

又例如:「我們的演出很成功」是Our performance was a success

我為當警察的妹妹感到驕傲,譯成I take pride in my sister who is a policeman。中文的驕傲是形容詞,轉換成英文pride

「卡埃塔独裁统治被推翻,再一次证明进行殖民战争是枉费心机」譯成The overthrow of the Caetano dictatorship has demonstrated again the futility of the colonial wars.


參考:http://www.translations.com.tw/TranslationNews/Art-161.html

英文作文就是詞性轉換3: 中文動詞變英文介詞


因為英語句子旳動詞要最少化,所以不能將中文的動詞全譯作英文的動詞,而除了名詞外,介詞也是一種避免英文動詞過多的方法。

例子:我們全體贊成他的建議。譯出來是:We were all in favor  of his suggestion.

又或:這個問題正在研究,譯成:The problem is under consideration. 



英文作文就是詞性轉換4-中文名詞轉英文動詞

雖然英文的動詞要最少化,要將中文的動詞轉作英文的名詞,但有趣的是,有時中文的名詞卻要轉為英文的動詞。

例子:梁振英的演講給觀察的印象很深。

若直譯,會是:The impression of CY Leung’s speech to the audience was very deep.

這句英文是中式英文。

應該這樣譯:CY Leung’s speech impressed the audience deeply.

中文的名詞印象,轉作英文的動詞impress

另一個例子:無線電視台的節目的特點是反智。

直譯是:The feature of TVB programmes is its stupidity. 這句英文不是錯,但也可以這樣譯:TVB programmes are characterized by its stupidity. 雖然英文句子是名字比較多,但不代表動詞完全不重要;比起is, is characterized 是更有力的動詞。

還有這句:劉德華在戲中佔了重要的角色。

英文是:Andy Lau figures prominently in the movie. 比起Andy Lau has an important role in the movie中的has,當然figure是更好的動詞,加上prominently更成習慣語。






中英被動句

英語的被動句很有趣。很多中文句子雖然沒有「被」這個字,但實際是被動句,因此譯成英文的被動式。

例如:這間學校將於今年年底建成。譯成英文是:The construction of the school will be completed by the end of this year.

又或:請全體職員下午2時在會議室集合。譯成英文是:All staff are requested to meet in the conference room at 2 p.m.

從以上例句看到,其實中文不是沒有被動句,只是不是時常有被動標記,如「被」、「遭」、「給」等。

反而,中文常常也用沒有被動標記的被動句,而且有很多慣用語,如:

「應該說」,譯成英文是:It should be said that…

「很明顯」是:It is obvious that…

「普遍認為」是:It is generally agreed that…

「大家知道」是:It is well known that…

「必須指出」是:It should be pointed out that…

「必須承認」是:It should be admitted that….

「無可否認」是:It should not be denied that…

「可以肯定」是:It can be confirmed that…

「由此可見」是:It can be seen that…

「人們希望」是:It is hoped that…


大家可以看到,英文譯為被動句的,中文都沒有被動標記。

英文作文就是增補5種字

英文作文就是翻譯中文成英文,方法就是增補7種字。

第一種是代詞,如: 接到你的來信,非常高興。

中文沒有主語,這是中文的習慣。但英文一定要:I am very glad to have received your letter.

代詞可以是名詞,也可以是形容詞:我們響應了祖國的號召,譯成:We responded to the call of our motherland.

第二種增補是連詞(conjunction)。中文經常省略連詞,但英文不能,要準確說明句子關係,如:姐姐在等我,我得走了。譯成英文要有「因果連詞」:My sister is expecting me, so I must be off now.

第三種是介詞。其實中文不是沒有介詞,但卻很多時不必要。例如:我們車站見吧。英文是:Let's meet at the station. 中文說:「我們在車站見吧」也沒有問題,只是累贅一點。

第四種是冠詞(article)。中文真的很少要說「一個」、「一隻」等:我們對問題要作全面的分析,才能解決得妥當,英文卻要加a, an, the:We must make a comprehensive analysis of a problem, before it can be properly solved.

第五種是其他名詞。例如:結婚大辦酒席,可免則免了。譯成英文是:The practice of giving lavish feasts at weddings can well be dispensed with. 英文多了個practice,是giving lavish feast的這個行為。有時候類似practice等表示範疇的字,增補是為了更讓人明白。

此為中譯英,或英文作文需要的5大增補。

注意,若英譯中,就是減少這5大詞類。

英翻中要刪字,中翻英要增字

關於英翻中要刪字,中翻英要增字,這篇文章也歸因於中文是意合,英文是形合的分別:

「咦,為什麼這個字沒有翻?為什麼多翻了這個字?
翻譯的時候,有不少人會問這個問題。

舉例來說:
“You must pay three days within parking, or else you will get a ticket.”
「停車三天內就得繳費,不然會被開罰。」
原文中的兩個you怎麼不見了?
這是因為中文是意合(hypotaxis)的語言,
英文則是形合(parataxis)。

形合和意和又是什麼呢?
簡單來說,形合就是以形為本,
講究以特定架構來賦予語言意義。
英文十分講究文法,兩個動詞之間就是得有連接詞,
主詞不能少等…
中文則是意合的語言,不似英文有一套固定的規則。
所以中翻英則會需要加上很多東西。

翻譯師的工作須經一層又一層的思考,
中翻英時像拿著放大鏡般,要不斷擴充原文,
英翻中時則得這邊刪那邊減,以避免翻譯腔。
這就是為什麼word-for-word translation是行不通的,
也是為什麼Google翻譯不太可靠。
萬事還是先請教過翻譯師比較保險囉!」

source:http://www.imtranslationweb.com/iamblog/translation-stuff/34/

英文增字中文減字的兩個原因

2014年4月2日星期三

英文作文就是增補5種字
英文作文就是翻譯中文成英文,方法就是增補7種字。

第一種是代詞,如: 接到你的來信,非常高興。

中文沒有主語,這是中文的習慣。但英文一定要:I am very glad to have received your letter.

代詞可以是名詞,也可以是形容詞:我們響應了祖國的號召,譯成:We responded to the call of our motherland.

第二種增補是連詞(conjunction)。中文經常省略連詞,但英文不能,要準確說明句子關係,如:姐姐在等我,我得走了。譯成英文要有「因果連詞」:My sister is expecting me, so I must be off now.

第三種是介詞。其實中文不是沒有介詞,但卻很多時不必要。例如:我們車站見吧。英文是:Let's meet at the station. 中文說:「我們在車站見吧」也沒有問題,只是累贅一點。

第四種是冠詞(article)。中文真的很少要說「一個」、「一隻」等:我們對問題要作全面的分析,才能解決得妥當,英文卻要加a, an, the:We must make a comprehensive analysis of a problem, before it can be properly solved.

第五種是其他名詞。例如:結婚大辦酒席,可免則免了。譯成英文是:The practice of giving lavish feasts at weddings can well be dispensed with. 英文多了個practice,是giving lavish feast的這個行為。有時候類似practice等表示範疇的字,增補是為了更讓人明白。

此為中譯英,或英文作文需要的5大增補。

注意,若英譯中,就是減少這5大詞類。
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標籤: 詞的增補
英翻中要刪字,中翻英要增字
關於英翻中要刪字,中翻英要增字,這篇文章也歸因於中文是意合,英文是形合的分別:

「咦,為什麼這個字沒有翻?為什麼多翻了這個字?
翻譯的時候,有不少人會問這個問題。

舉例來說:
“You must pay three days within parking, or else you will get a ticket.”
「停車三天內就得繳費,不然會被開罰。」
原文中的兩個you怎麼不見了?
這是因為中文是意合(hypotaxis)的語言,
英文則是形合(parataxis)。

形合和意和又是什麼呢?
簡單來說,形合就是以形為本,
講究以特定架構來賦予語言意義。
英文十分講究文法,兩個動詞之間就是得有連接詞,
主詞不能少等…
中文則是意合的語言,不似英文有一套固定的規則。
所以中翻英則會需要加上很多東西。

翻譯師的工作須經一層又一層的思考,
中翻英時像拿著放大鏡般,要不斷擴充原文,
英翻中時則得這邊刪那邊減,以避免翻譯腔。
這就是為什麼word-for-word translation是行不通的,
也是為什麼Google翻譯不太可靠。
萬事還是先請教過翻譯師比較保險囉!」

source:http://www.imtranslationweb.com/iamblog/translation-stuff/34/
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英文增字中文減字的兩個原因
為何一般來說,英譯中要刪減,中譯英要增補呢?

我認同有兩個原因。

一是英语重形合汉语重意合。

就整体结构和表达方式而言,英语是一种形合性的语言,而汉语则是一种意合性的语言。英语的句子一般是按照固定的结构和方式来组织和表达的,偏重于形式;汉语的句子则是按照其字词的含义来组合和连接的,表达方式灵活多变,偏重于语意。英语句子之间的关系可以通过时态、标点符号、连接词等表示得一清二楚;而汉语句子之间的关系则要靠句子本身的语意来表现。

【例1】 Anotherattempt, and you’ll succeed.

【译文】再试一次,你就会成功。
或:只要再试一次,你就会成功。

【分析】本句是一个由and连接的简单并列句,一般将来时态明确表明了两句间的动作关系。但汉语译文就比较灵活,句子之间的关系主要靠语意来表达,关联词可译(括号内译文)也可不译,习惯于不译。

【例2】 Now the integrated circuit has reduced by many times the size ofthe computer of which it forms a part, thus creating a new generation ofportable minicomputer.

【译文】现在集成电路成了计算机的组成部分,使计算机的体积大大缩小,从而产生了新一代的可携式微型计算机。

【分析】本句是由一个主句、一个定语从句和一个分词状语组成的主从复合句。主句用现在完成时,定语从句用一般现在时,再加一个由thus连接的现在分词短语作状语,通过时态、逗号、关联词和现在分词短语把各句之间的关系表达得非常清楚。而汉语则在对各句简单陈述的基础上,通过调整语序和运用“使”、“从而”的词意把各句之间的层层递进的因果关系表达出来。

掌握“英语重形合、汉语重意合”的差异是做好英汉互译的核心。英译汉时,要尽量在理清英语各句关系的基础上,打乱其原有的句式结构,按照“汉语重意合”的表达习惯和方式,重新组织句序;相反,在汉译英时,要把汉语各个分句的关系尽量用连接词、时态和标点符号等予以表示,最后按照英语的表达习惯组合成复杂的句子结构。例如,众所周知的,虽然“long time no see”(好久不见了)这句典型的中式英语也广为接受,但它是不符合英语表达习惯的,是典型的不顾英语语法和句型结构的误译。其实,按照英语的语法结构,应该这样表达:It’s a long time since we saw.

此外,在做英译汉时,要尽量避免“翻译腔”。所谓“翻译腔”,就是指英文的意思虽然勉强能懂,但直译或硬译的痕迹到处可见,“洋味”太重,可读性太低。究其原因,一是实践较少,经验不足;二是语言能力有限,重形式而轻内容,没有掌握英汉两种语言的基本差别和一些必要的翻译技巧,见到什么就翻译什么。

【例3】 When arepresentative exceeds his allotted time, the President shall call him to orderwithout delay.

【译文】(翻译腔)当一位代表超过他的分配时间,主席将告诉他命令,不要推迟。

(改进)(如果)代表发言超过规定时间,主席应督促他遵守规则。

【分析】该句是一个when引导的主从复合句,看似一个简单的“主将从现”句,但却不能直译成汉语(如第一句译文)。When 从句其实表示一种假设,如果直译成“当……时候”,就没有表达出原句的逻辑关系;his这样的形容词性物主代词翻译成中文时可以不译;shall是个情态动词,不是将来时;order是名词,表示“规则”,不能硬译为“命令”。

第二個原因是英语句长复杂汉语句短简练。

英语是一种形合性的语言,注重句子的结构,句与句之间可以靠标点符号、连接词、介词等衔接而无限扩展,往往一句话可以包含多个意思,是一种“树形结构式”的语言。但是,汉语则相反,它是一种意合性的语言,句与句之间的关系主要通过字词的语意来表达,一句话一般只能表达一个意思,是一种“竹形结构式”的语言。这种长短句之间的转化正是英译汉的难点,所以考研的翻译也主要是考查学生翻译英语复杂长句的能力。例如:

【例4】 Plastics ismade from water which is a natural resource inexhaustible and availableeverywhere, coal which can be mined through automatic and mechanical processesat less cost and lime which can be obtained from the calcinations of limestonewidely present in nature.

【译文】塑料是由水、煤和石灰石制成的。水是到处可以获得的、取之不尽的一种自然资源;煤可以通过自动化和机械化来开采,成本较低;石灰可由煅烧自然界广泛存在的石灰石而得到。

【分析】原文是一个典型的英语复杂长句,由42个单词组成,全靠一个逗号和几个连词结合成一个多层次的、内容丰富的句子。主句的主干是:Plastics is made from water, coal and lime; water, coal和lime之后各有一个定语从句,其中的后两个定语从句还是被动语态。所以,按照汉语的表达习惯,翻译时要化整为零,可以把主句和各个定语从句分开译成短句,其中的一些状语比如at less cost也可以单独处理成短句。

因此,在英译汉时,遇到复杂的长句,首先要有耐心地分析句子成分,抽出主句和从句的主干,将其翻译成独立的分句;其次,一些状语,比如分词短语、介词短语等,也可以译成短句;最后,按照汉语的表达习惯,将这些分句连接起来。

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英中正說反譯


英语中含有no,not,never,none,un-,-less,im-,in-,ir-等成分的词句,都被视为否定表达,简称反说。汉语中含有“不”,“没”,“未”,“休”,“莫”,“非”,“否”,“勿”等也都是否定表达。在翻译中通常都可以保留原文的否定表达,但有时为了表达更为顺畅,符合目的语的表达方法,或为了增强语言效果,有时反说正译,或正说反译。
反译:

英语中很多词本身就含有否定意义,beyond, absent, stop, bad, avoid, exclude, except, doubt, resistant, refuse, few, little, 这类词在翻译中要译出它的含有的否定意义。

The window refuses to open.
窗户打不开。

Children were excluded from getting in the building.
孩子不许进入这幢楼房。

Such a chance denied me.
我没有得到这个机会。

The explanation is pretty thin.
这个解释站不住脚。

I have fallen behind with my correspondence.
我有一些信件没有及时答复。

Fully clothed, he fell across his bunk and was instantly sleep.
他衣服也不脱往床铺上横着一躺,很快就睡着了。

He was 75, but he carried his years lightly.


他75岁了,可是并不显老。

中英反說正譯


這兩種方法通常用于漢譯英,偶爾也用于英譯漢。所謂正譯,是指把句子按照與漢語相同的語序或表達方式翻譯成英語。所謂反譯則是指把句子按照與漢語相反的語序或表達方式譯成英語。正譯與反譯常常具有同義的效果,但反譯往往更符合英語的思維方式和表達習慣。因此比較地道。如:

(1) 在美國,人人都能買到槍。
In the United States, everyone can buy a gun. (正譯)
In the United States, guns are available to everyone. (反譯)

(2) 妳可以從因特網上獲得這一信息。
You can obtain this information on the Internet. (正譯)
This information is accessible/available on the Internet. (反譯)

(3) 他突然想到了一個新主意。
Suddenly he had a new idea. (正譯)
He suddenly thought out a new idea. (正譯)
A new idea suddenly occurred to/struck him. (反譯)

(4) 他仍然沒有弄懂我的意思。
He still could not understand me. (正譯)
Still he failed to understand me. (反譯)

(5) 無論如何,她算不上一位思維敏捷的學生。
She can hardly be rated as a bright student. (正譯)
She is anything but a bright student. (反譯)

(6) Please withhold the document for the time being.
請暫時扣下這份文件。(正譯)
請暫時不要發這份文件。(反譯)

最重要是英正中反

        由于国家、历史、地理、社会文化背景和生活习性的不同,汉英两种语言在表达正说和反说时有很大差异,尤其英语在否定意义的表达上更为复杂,有时形式否定而实质肯定,或形式肯定而实质否定。在两种语言互译时,原文中正说的句子可能不得不处理成反说,或是用反说表达更为合适。反之亦然。翻译中,这种把正说处理成反说、把反说处理成正说的译法,就称为正反译法。

  正反译法是翻译技巧中的一个重要方法,属于引申和修辞范围。

  笼统的说,英语句子中含有“never”、“no”、“not”、“un-”、“im-”、“in-”、“ir-”、“-less”等否定词以及否定前缀或后缀的单词,以及汉语句子中含有“不”、“没”、“无”、“未”、“甭”、“别”、“休”、“莫”、“非”、“勿”、“毋”等否定词的即为反说,不含有这些否定词的即为正说。

  但实际操作时,正说和反说的界限又变得极为模糊,例如“correct”可以翻译成“正确”(正说),也可以翻译成“没有毛病”(反说)。因此,到底译文要采用正说还是反说,就完全要看译文语言的惯用表达和上下文的语气语态了。

  在正反译法中,英译汉正转反(正说反译法)和汉译英反转正(反说正译法)是最为重要的两种正反译法。

  英译汉正转反


  英语中有些否定概念是通过含有否定意义或近似否定意义的词来表达的,虽然形式是肯定的,但这类词大多是某些肯定词所引申或变化出来的反义词,或经过长期历史演变而引申出其他否定词义,即所谓的“含蓄否定词”或“暗指否定词”,这类词在译成汉语时,需要变成汉语的否定词组,必要时还需要作词类转换。

  1、名词

  — 含蓄否定名词主要有:shortness / shortage(不够; 不足)、lack(缺乏; 没有)、absence(不在)、failure(未能; 不成功)、defiance(不顾; 无视)、denial(否认; 否定)、exclusion(排除)、freedom(不; 免除)、refusal(不愿; 不允许)、loss(失去)等。

  Shortness of time has required the omission of some states. 由于时间不够,没能访问那些国家。

  Behave yourself during my absence. 我不在时要规矩点。

  We were perplexed by his failure to answer the letter. 他何以不回信,我们大惑不解。

  2、动词或动词短语

  — 英语中常见的含蓄否定动词包括:refuse(不愿; 不肯; 无法)、lack(缺乏; 没有)、defy(不服从; 不遵守; 不让)、forbid(不许)、stop(不准; 别)、ignore(不理; 不肯考虑; 无视; 不顾)、hate(不愿意)、miss(没听清楚; 没赶上)等。

  He refuses to come in. 他不愿意进来。(Chris TAO 于2012年10月22日归纳总结并存手稿。)

  Children were excluded from getting in the building. 孩子不许进入这幢楼房。

  Do you know why she is always trying to avoid you? 你知道她为什么老是不想见到你吗?

  Stop talking nonsense! 别胡说八道!

  I missed what you said because of the noise outside. 由于外面的噪音,我没听清楚你说的话。

  He was 75, but he carried his years lightly / easily. 他75岁了,可是并不显老。

  The plan as it leaves much to be desired. 目前这样的方案大有不足之处。

  Please remain seated until the aircraft comes to a complete stop. 飞机停稳前,请不要离开座位。

  The above facts insist on the following conclusions. 上述事实使人们不能不得出以下结论。

  3、 形容词或形容词短语

  — 含蓄否定形容词主要有:absent(不在; 不到; 不出席)、blind(看不到; 不注意)、awkward(不熟练;不灵活)、bad(令人不愉快的; 不舒服的)、dead(无生命的; 无感觉的; 不毛的)、difficult(不容易的)、foreign to(不适合的; 与…无关)、short of(不够)、poor(不好的; 不幸的; 不足的)、thin(站不住脚; 不够有力)等。

  The child is still awkward with his chopsticks. 那孩子还不太会用筷子。

  What you said is foreign to the main issue of our discussion.你所讲的与我们讨论的主题无关。

  The explanation is pretty thin. 这个解释站不住脚。

  The corrupt police chief turned a blind eye to the open gambling in the town. 这个受贿的警察局长对镇上的公开赌博佯装不见。

  We were watching the fluid situation with concern. 我们关切地注视着动荡不安的局面。

  He would be the last man to say such things. 他绝不可能说这种话。

  4、介词或介词短语

  — 含蓄否定介词和介词短语主要有:without(没有)、against(不符合)、except(不包括)、beyond(无; 无法)、beside(不对; 不符合)、above(不至于)、behind(未能; 尚未; 还没有)、instead of(没有; 而不是)、aside from(不包括)、far from(绝不是; 还不; 非但不…(甚至)还…)、at large(未被捕; 未捉拿归案)、at a loss(不知所措; 不知如何是好; 完全不明白/不理解)、but for(要不是/没有…就不能/不会/无法…)、would rather…than(宁愿/宁可…也不)等。

  His answer is beside the mark. 他的回答文不对题。

  He is above meanness and deceit. 他不至于做卑鄙和欺骗的事情。

  I have fallen behind with my correspondence. 我有一些信件没有及时答复。

  It was beyond his power to sign such a contract. 他无权签订这种合同。

  The speaker was speaking over my head. 演讲者讲的内容太深奥了,我听不懂。

  The escaped criminal is still at large. 逃犯仍未捉拿归案。

  He is always at a loss what to say in front of strangers. 他在生人面前总是不知要说什么。

  But for the workers’ help, we should not have succeeded in this experiment. 没有工人们的帮助,我们这个实验便不会成功。

  5、 副词

  I stayed awake almost the whole night. 我昨晚几乎一夜没睡。

  He dived into the water fully clothed and rescued the children. 他衣服都没脱就跳入水中,把孩子们救了上来。

  Slowly he pulled the letter out of the envelope, and unfolded it. 他不慌不忙地从信封里抽出信纸,把它打开。

  6、连词

  — 包括:before(还没来得及)、unless(如果没有…就…)等。

  Before I could say “thank you”, the postman had disappeared around the corner. 我还没来得及说声“谢谢”,邮递员已经消失在拐角处了。

  Unless there is any other business, we can end the meeting. 如果没有别的事情,我们的会议就到此结束了。

  7、习惯用法和固定搭配

  He is anything but a writer. 他决不是一个作家。

  The decision has to come. 决定尚未作出。

  It is a wise father that knows his own child. 无论怎样聪明的父亲也不见得了解自己的孩子。

  I’m only too pleased to work with you. 能和你一起工作真是太高兴了。

  I’m but too glad to do so. 我非常愿意这样做。

  We will die before we give in. 我们宁死不屈。

  The critic had something of a case. 批评家也并非全然没有道理。

  I am wiser than to believe such stories. 我还不至于蠢到竟然相信这种谎言。

  He would rather die than go back on his comrades. 他宁死也不出卖自己的同志。

  8、含有否定意义的谚语和警句

  Road Ahead Closed 前方施工 禁止通行

  Admission By Invitation Only 非请莫入

  Keep off the grass! 请勿践踏草坪!

  Wet paint! 油漆未干!

  Better to reign in hell than serve in heaven. 宁为鸡首,不为牛后。

  Seeing is believing. 百闻不如一见。

  Let sleeping dog lie. 莫惹是生非。

  Call a spade a spade. 直言不讳。

  英译汉反转正

  英语中明显使用not、no等否定词或否定前后缀的反说语句有时却是含有肯定的含义,在这种情况下,我们在译成汉语时,可以用肯定形式来表达。

  1、 名词

  The machine has two serious disadvantages. 那台机器有两个严重缺陷。

  The dishonesty of the city officials was exposed by the newspaper. 市政府官员们的欺诈行为在报纸上披露出来。

  He showed a strong dislike for father’s business. 他对他父亲的生意表现出强烈的厌恶。

  2、 动词或动词词组

  The doubt was still unsolved after his repeated explanations. 虽经他一再解释,疑团仍然存在。

  Scientists have unlocked the secret of the atom. 科学家已经揭开了原子的秘密。

  The examination left no doubt that the patient had died of cancer. 调查结果清楚表明,病人死于癌症。

  I only wish he was here himself, as I don’t doubt he will be here at sunset tomorrow. 我希望他也在这里,我有把握,明天太阳下山的时候,他就要来了。

  3、 形容词和形容词词组

  He gave me an indefinite answer. 他给了我一个含糊的答复。

  It was inconsiderate of him to mention the matter in her hearing. 他实在轻率,竟当着她的面谈论此事。

  4、 介词和介词词组

  The problem is not beyond our reach. 这个问题我们能解决。

  The whole gun was no longer than eight inches. 整支枪的长度只有8英寸。

  5、 副词

  The thought of returning to his native land never deserted him. 归国的念头始终萦绕在他的心中。

  The sea was, unfortunately, very rough that day. 可惜,那天的海浪很大。

  6、 习惯用法和固定搭配

  To be or not to be, that is the question. 生存还是毁灭,这是值得考虑的。

  There is nothing like mineral water to quench one’s thirst. 矿泉水是解渴的最佳饮料。

  Violent video games appeared no more likely to cause loss of temper than other forms of play. 含有暴力内容的电子游戏和其他形式的游戏一样,似乎都不太可能使人受挫发火。

  You cannot praise the play too highly. 这出戏你怎么称赞也不过分。

  These scientists could not believe the two Curies more. 这些科学家完全相信居里夫妇。

  It will not be long before they understand the truth that study hard before it is too late. 他们大概不久就会理解要趁早努力学习的道理。

  She won’t go away until you promise to help her.. 她要等你答应帮助她以后才肯走。

  7、 反说祈使句正译

  No smoking! 严禁吸烟!

  No deposit will be refunded unless ticket produced. 凭票退还押金。

  Don’t lose time in posting this letter. 赶快把这封信寄出去。

  英译汉中特殊否定的处理

  1、 双重否定

  (1) 双重否定译肯定

  There can be no sunshine without shadow. 有阳光就有阴影。

  We must never stop taking an optimistic view of life. 我们对生活要永远抱乐观态度。

  Such mistakes couldn’t long escape notice. 这类错误迟早会被发觉的。

  We can’t be too careful in doing this kind of experiments. 我们在做这类实验时应尽可能小心。(我们在做这类实验时再小心也不为过。)

  (2) 双重否定译双重否定

  There is no story without coincidence. 无巧不成书。

  2、 部分否定

  Not all minerals come from mines. 并非所有矿物都来自矿山。

  All that glitters is not gold. (= Not all that glitters is gold.) 闪光的不一定都是金子。

  Both of the substances do not dissolve in water. 不是两种物质都溶于水。

  3、 否定转移

  We don’t believe that our mother tongue is inferior to any other languages in the world. 我们相信,祖国的语言并不亚于世界任何其他语言。

  We do not live to eat, but eat to live. 我们活着不是为了吃饭,而吃饭是为了活着。


  汉译英反转正


  与英译汉正转反的道理相同,英语的一些否定式有时必须译成汉语的肯定式,反之,汉语的一些肯定式有时也必须译成英语的否定式。具体操作时,用英语的含蓄否定词或暗指否定词代替汉语原文中的肯定词,进行与英译汉正转反的逆向操作即可。

  1、 名词

  这就是墨守成规,不愿进步。This was a refusal to change, to make progress.

  他们未能做出决定,这使她进退无门。 Their failure to come to a decision put her in an impossible position.

  他们宁愿安逸于世,免除负担。They prefer family privacy and freedom from responsibility.

  2、 动词

  她丈夫不愿意见到她。Her husband hates to see her.

  这些争论解构有余,建构不足,甚至不顾基本文学事实。 These controversies focus on deconstruction rather than construction and some even ignore the basic literary facts.

  3、 形容词

  这是千真万确的真理。This is an irrefutable truth.

  他因为某种理由而没有出席会议。He was absent from the meeting for one reason or another.

  4、 介词和介词短语

  他似乎想不出恰当的字眼来阐明自己的观点。He seemed to be at a loss for the precise words to elaborate his opinion.

  他提前三天到达是我们没有想到的。His arrival three days in advance is beyond our expectation.

  5、 连词

  还没到家,她就激动得不得了。She got extremely excited before she reached her home.

  6、 习惯用法和固定搭配

  请勿大声喧哗。 Keep quiet.

  禁止张贴 Posters Forbidden

  毋庸置疑,中国的航空航天工业在过去的四十年中已取得了辉煌的成就。It is beyond doubt that China has made brilliant achievements in aviation and space industry in the last forty years.

  7、 含有否定意义的谚语和警句

  — 汉语中很多带有“不”、“无”、“非”、“未”、“没”的成语在英语中都被译成了正说的肯定式

  充耳不闻turn a dead ear to

  彻夜不眠stay up the whole night

  好景不长pleasant hours fly fast

  一成不变stick to the old form

  朝不保夕may fall any moment

  怒不可遏make one’s blood boil

  麻木不仁dead to all feelings

  弱不禁风as weak as water

  有条不紊in perfect order

  求之不得exceedingly welcome

  白璧无瑕pristine and pure

  风雨无阻in all weather

  言之无物empty talk

  遥遥无期in a distant future

  走投无路be up against the wall

  清白无辜have clean hands

  座无虚席draw a full house

  忍无可忍have exhausted one’s patience

  茫无头绪lose the thread to

  没精打采low in spirit

  没大没小rude to one’s elders

  口是心非play a double game

  文过饰非cover up one’s errors

  答非所问answer beside the point

  未卜先知be able to foresee the future

  没有不透风的墙Walls have ears.

  天下无难事,只怕有心人When there is a will, there is a way.

  欲速则不达Haste makes waste.

  人不可貌相A fair face may hide a foul heart.

  欲加之罪,何患无词He who has a mind to beat his dog will easily find his stick.

  醉翁之意不在酒Many kiss the baby for the nurse’s sake.

  远水救不了近火While the grass grows, the sheep starves.

  汉译英正转反

  虽然比汉译英反转正的情况少一些,但还是有一些时候,我们需要将汉语原文的正说译成英语译文的反说,英语译文可以使用not、no等否定词或否定前后缀的反说语句来处理。

  1、 名词

  女人因缺点而美丽。Flawless makes women perfect.

  2、 动词

  皮特急急忙忙地拆开了礼物。Peter uncover his gift in a hurry.

  3、 形容词

  那个房间的窗总是关着的。The windows of that room were never open.

  她每天都要面对一大堆家务。Housework at home is innumerous for her everyday.

  4、 介词

  她光着脚走进了房间。She came into the room with no shoes on.

  这个小孩现在完全能自己走路了。The child can walk without any help now.

  5、 副词

  他一直希望自己能成为老板的助手。The idea that he should become an assistant to his boss has never deserted him.

  6、 习惯用法和固定搭配

  法律面前,人人平等。Law is no respecter of persons.

source: http://www.douban.com/group/topic/39096695/

翻译可译性及不可译性的特征分析

翻译可译性及不可译性的特征分析

source: http://www.jiaoyusou.com/thesis/3578166/


 一篇好的译文,它的读者在阅读之后所获得的概念理应与原文读者所获得的概念相同;如果是文学作品,读者就应获得同样的艺术感受。但事实上,这只能作为翻译标准中一个理想的目标,要达到这个目标确非易事。尤金·奈达指出[1],如果译文读者对译文所作出的反应与原文读者对原文所作出的反应基本一致,那么便可认为翻译是成功的。这里,我们只求反应“基本一致”,而不求“完全一致”,因为按照奈达的翻译理论,绝对一致的翻译是不存在的。乔治·斯坦纳[3]在他书中对历史上有关可译性的争论做了以下分析:“语言理论对于翻译是否可能这一问题,特别是对于不同语言之间的翻译是否可能的问题,具有决定性的影响。在语言理论的研究中存在着两种针锋相对的观点。一种观点说,语言的底层结构是普遍存在的,而且是共同的。人类各种语言的不同之处主要在于表层。正因为那些在遗传方面、历史方面、社会方面普遍存在的根深蒂固的东西都可以在人类使用的每一种语言中找到,所以翻译是可能的。

  因此一般说来,用任何语言表达的信息都可以译成另一种语言,这就是可译性,语言之间之所以存在可译性,是因为人类在表达概念和思维时存在广泛的共性。不同语言中的概念之间存在相关的等值成分或相关的语境特征。此外,人类思维的逻辑形式也存在广泛的共性,并不因语言之不同而逻辑各异。由于人类思维在概念内涵、情景、逻辑三个范畴中存在共性,当概念被组织起来以表达一个完整的思想,即句子时,不同的语言就往往具有大体同一的模式。

  1.可译性为什么有限度

  各种语言之间除去共同性外还有很大的差异性。差异性指的不仅仅是语音、拼写、语法等方面的不同,更重要的是指表达方式、语言习惯不同,包括用词、比喻、联想等不同。由于这些不同,文章在翻译时很难,甚至根本不可能把原文信息所表达的内容、思想、感情完全地、毫厘不差地移植到译文信息中去,这就使得译文若与原文相比总是存在着一定的差距,这种差距只要不影响译文,读者得到与原文读者大致相同的感受是允许的,这就是可译性的限度。意大利有句名言:“翻译即叛逆者”,把翻译称作是一种“背叛”,所谓“背叛”是指翻译时原文有不少地方未能在译文中体现出来,产生这种现象的原因实际上也就是可译性的限度问题。

  翻译原语一个词就必须在译语中找出一个词义相同(包括词义范围相等,感情色彩相同)的对等词。由于文化等方面的原因,有时原语中有些词在译语中没有与之相当的对等词。鲁迅曾经说,翻译时“一个名词或动词,写不出也还得想,一直弄到头昏眼花,好像在脑子里面摸一个急于要开箱子的钥匙,却没有”。鲁迅所说的“却没有”就是因为汉语没有这个词的对等词找不到对等词,而用解释来进行释义则不是翻译,如英美动物学家把所有动物分成三大类,即predator,prey和scavenger。predator是指靠捕食其他动物为生的,如虎、狼,Prey是指为其他动物所捕食的,如野兔、山羊。Scavenger是指自己不杀生,专吃别的动物杀死的动物,如秃鹫、鬣狗。中国动物学家没有这种分法,因而这三个词汉语都没有相应的对等词。若把predator,prey和scavenger分别译成“以猎食其他动物为生的动物”、“被别的动物捕食的动物”、“吃死动物的动物”,译文与原词之间就有一定的差距,这种差距实际上也构成了可译性的限度。

  有时译语没有在意义上和原语完全相同的对等词,这种不完全的对等词语,或对等范围大小不同,或对等意义不甚确切,如:英语wife一词可用来表达汉语的妻子、夫人、爱人等。Cousin相当汉语的堂兄、堂弟、表哥、表妹等八个词,“scholar”与“学者”表面看来完全对应,其实不然。根据《现代汉语词典》,“学者”指在学术上有一定成就的人,而根据WEBSTER,“scholar”的定义是:博学的人;专家,尤指人文科学专家;奖学金获得者;学生(1)a learned person(2)a specialist in a particular branch of learning,esp.in the humanities(3)a student given scholar ship aid(4)any student or pupil)。“Scholar”的词义涵盖面比“学者”宽得多,汉语“学者”的意义只包含scholar的定义之中。用这种不完全对等词进行翻译,译文就不能把原词的含义准确地表达出来,这也是产生可译性限度的原因之一。

  思想必须通过词语表达出来,而这种表达方式必须符合语言习惯才能被使用该语言的人接受。作为语际交流桥梁的翻译必须同时和两种语言打交道,原语有些表达方式不符合译语的语言习惯或不能为译语读者所接受,改用一种与原意近似又符合译语表达习惯的说法,可接受性提高了,但译文与原文难免有一些出入,原文中有些细微含义未能表达出来。如Literature in English指“用英语写的或出版的文学”,但这是解释不是翻译。译成“英语文学”不符合汉语习惯,若译成“英国文学”、“美国文学”甚至“英美文学”就和原意出入较大,因为原文还可以包括加拿大文学、澳大利亚文学、新西兰文学等。有时某种思想是通过比喻、联想、典故等方式形象生动地表达出来的,但原语中有些比喻、联想、典故在译语中没有类似的说法,若把这类词原封不动地照搬到译语中来,就不能为读者所接受。把意思译出来或改用译语的比喻、联想、典故符合译语习惯,但不可避免会使读者的感受意境略有不同。如:a cock-and-bull story(拙劣的谎言),keep up with the Joneses(追慕虚荣),the radio-activity of gifted teaching(出色的教学所产生的广泛影响),That must be his swan song.(那想必是他的辞世之作了或最后一次露面了)。这句话根据的是西方古代寓言:天鹅临死时发出美妙的歌声。以上比喻、典故词都是“不可译的”,汉语的翻译都只能是概念阐释或暗含义的阐明。遇到这种带有典故或强烈的异域文化与历史色调的形象性词语,经常只能采取意译法。

  2.不可译的情况

  下列情况,呈现为原文的词语无法在译文中表达出来,属于不可译的情况。

  2.1没有对等词

  有时原语的词在译语中没有相应的对等词,勉强找一个对等词往往词义出入太大,这是产生不可译的主要原因。例如:“老师”作为一种礼貌的称谓在英语中是没有对等词的,除非对教授,在姓名前冠以Professor,一般都以Mr.或Ms.相称,或当面尊称Sir,或Madam,在美国,对老师直呼其名也很普通,但不能称teacher,汉语“师傅”一词除表示能给徒工传授技术的工人外,也是对工人的一种尊称。英语没有这种尊称,若把“刘师傅”译成Master WorkerLiu是错译,因为master worker仅指可以收徒工的工人,况且master worker不可用作称呼语,Master Worker Liu不符合英语表达习惯,有人翻译“刘师傅”宁可采用音译,译作Liu shifu,正说明了这个词的不可译。另外,由于文化诸方面因素,原语和译语两种语言常常没有对等词。如在美国,教授有三个级别,即assistant professor,associate professor和professor,而我们只有教授和副教授两个级别。Assistant professor如果译成“助理教授”,中国人或许就会有些不明白,可能会译成“副教授”,可实际上assistant professor比副教授(associate professor)低一级,这些都是不可译的情况。

  2.2形式和内容必须兼顾的情况

  翻译时常会遇到形式和内容不能兼顾的情况。由于原语和译语的表达方式不同,若保存形式必然会影响内容,降低译文的可接受性,甚至会造成晦涩难懂的现象,这时只好牺牲形式保存内容。但有时原文的表达方式既包括形式又包括内容,即原文的思想是通过一种特殊形式表达出来的,形式改动了就会影响思想内容。语言中的幽默常产生于用词的机巧或讥诮,但这类用词和立意往往会在双语转换中消失。例如,现代英语中动词process是用得很广的,几乎可以用以指任何一种重复性动作或任何一种引起变化的动作(如“加工”)。美国一家杂志在一篇有关中东某君主国的报道中用这个词说了一句很幽默的话。说该国君主在其统治期间process so many women(意思是:糟蹋了数以千计的妇女),将process译成汉语以后,原文那种讥讽的幽默就完全消失了。双关语的可译性限度也很大,很多双关语实际上是“不可译”的。如:

  Professor of Physics:What is matter?
  Student:Never mind.
  Professor:Then what is mind?
  Student:It doesn’t matter.

  这段话利用matter和mind这两个词的双关语,matter指“物质”又指“事情”,“What is matter?”可理解成“什么是物质?”也可理解成“有什么事?”mind指“心理”又指“介意”,“反对”,Never mind.可理解成“不要紧”,也可理解成“绝不是心理”。由于这个对话用了好几个双关语,使之成为不可译。下面这段话利用tale(故事)和tail(尾巴)这两个同音词:

  “It’s a long,sad tale.”
  “Of course the tail is long,but why sad”the girl is thinking。

  汉语“故事”和“尾巴”不同音,所以不可译。

  再如英语的回文,Madam,I’m A dam.汉语没有这种语言形式,所以也不可译。

  3.不可译情况的补救

  承认原文可译性的限度,既不表明译者个人能力的差异,又不表明翻译研究只能到此却步。恰恰相反,它给译者和翻译研究提出了更进一步的课题。有些翻译家动脑筋想办法,发挥主观能动作用,将一些本属不可译的词语,如双关语等译出来,而且翻译得很好。以下例句是译者朝这方面努力的结果:

  But it was not from Henry; it was a message from the desk clerk.She read:“9:20.Mr.Remsee fone.You lost pkge in his ownership.He bid you stop before tiring.”She judged the last word was in tended to be“retiring”.

  原文作者为了表示旅店服务员文化水平不高,在写到message的内容时故意用了几个错字,如:Remsee应为Ramsey(拉姆西),fone应为phoned,stop是stop by(顺便访问)的意思。为了保持原作的风格,译文(华胄译)调整成:但那不是亨利写的,而是前台服务员留下的条子。她读道:“九点二十分,拉母希先生来电话,说你把包果拉在他家。他让你旧侵前到他那儿去。”她判断“旧侵”两个字可能是“就寝”。

  同义、近义词语的锤炼是鲁迅精湛语言艺术的主要表现,英译时较难复现。如《孔乙己》中孔乙己说“窃书不能算偷”。只承认“窃”,不承认“偷”。“窃”和“偷”在汉语中其实是一回事,但在孔乙己看来,显然具有不同的含意。杨译“Taking books can’t be countedas stealing.”也让他用同义词偷换概念,使其咬文嚼字、死要面子的性格特点得到再现。把“窃”和“偷”分别译为taking和stealing确实非常贴切,但这译文的选择显然是费了一番苦心的。这里既体现了译者对原文的独特的理解,又表现出译者对译文语言的驾驭能力,显示出译者的一种创造性精神。

  翻译中为提高译文质量而付出的努力应是永无止境的。由于两种语言的差异,原文的可译性限度是绝对的,可译性总是相对的。绝对的可译性是不存在的。翻译中的“忠”与“信”也只能是相对的,绝对忠实于原文的译文是不存在的。翻译者纵有百般技艺也不能达到与原文的“绝对忠实”。在英译汉中,目前解决可译性限度这个矛盾的办法是,探求双语在深层意念上的对等,摆脱语言表层的约束,采用解释、铺叙、阐明,以及散文化等手段,基本转换形式是增词、语义融合及平行对应。其结果势必在某种程度失去原文的形象性及感染力,失去原文的某种情态、色彩或修辞效果。就实质而言,翻译的一切手段和转换形式都不过是权宜之计。译者的笔下功夫,在于如何尽最大的努力权衡运用权宜之计的得失。从这个意义上说,翻译的艺术就是权衡的艺术。

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翻譯大師教你寫出好句子: 其實即係轉詞性

早前看了本書,教寫英文.作者係台灣從事翻譯工作的教授.她整本書都係例句,示範英文應怎樣寫. 我睇過覺得幾有啟發性.

第一章,佢用左5句作為示範,從中我們可以看出, 英文係幾咁婉轉.若用中文方式去寫英文,即使文法?, style也不好. 因為中文表達的意思很白, 若用英文去講, 有多一種修飾.

大家可以試下翻譯以下這5句, 再看看作者的答案:

1. 他感到很失望, 所以他一個字都不說.

2. 不管你的心情如何, 你就是不能偷懶!

3. 他雖然窮得不得了, 但是他對自己仍是充滿信心.

4. 她辛苦工作了二十年後, 終於買下了第一個房子.

5. 我一向如此, 而且以後也不改變!

大部分中國學生會這樣用英文寫這幾句:

1. He feels very disappointed, so he does not say a word.

2. No matter how you feel, you can't be lazy.

3. Even though he is terrribly poor, he is still confident in himself.

4. After she has worked very hard for 20 years, she finally bought her first apartment.

5. I am always like this, and I won't change, either.

係咪好熟口熟面呢?因為我們大多數香港人也是這樣寫英文. 看看教授如何寫正確的英文:

1. Disappointedly, he remains speechless. (動詞轉副詞, 動詞轉形容詞)

2. Your state of mind can't justisfy your laziness. (動詞轉名詞, 形容詞變名詞,兩句用動詞合成一句)

3. His extreme poverty doesn't deprive of his self-esteem. (形容詞轉名詞x2, 兩句用動詞合成一句, 正說變反說)

4. Twenty years' hard work was rewarded with her first apartment.(動詞變名詞x2, 兩句用動詞合成一句)

5. I will be what I have been.(兩句用動詞合成一句)

但是

 in spite of/ despite of
 having said that
 However,     
 Be that as it may,       
 Nevertheless
otherwise,      
 Nonetheless,
yet,       
 Albeit  
 but      
 Even so
 On the other hand, ...on the other hand,...
 Notwithstanding 
  or else,
whereas, [note: 發音/weəˈræz/ ]
instead
unlike, 
rather than,
more than,
In contrast,
on the contrary,
conversely,
although,
even though,
admittedly,
even granted,
meanwhile,
anyway,

所以

As a result 結果
as a result of 
Consequently 結果
because
because of 
due to
owing to
for
on account of
For this reason,因此
Hence 所以
Therefore 所以
cause 引致
generate 產生
create 製造
lead to 引致
...due to... 
mean 導致
in that: e.g His suggestion is good in that it means no extra costs(他的提議很好,因為無須額外費用)


accordingly, [in a way that is suitable or right for the situation ]