problem and solution句式系列1

2015年,我參加了英文的DSE考試.英文總體攞咗5, 作文部分攞5*.

就係為咗預備呢次考試,我歸納了寫一篇文章的的步驟.

基本上,大部分長文,都係要帶出一個議題的問題,然後提出解決辦法.雖然我無科學地統計過,但近年DSE大部分議論文都係照呢個格式出題.

因此, 同學們最重要係跟住作呢種文的格式開每一段,背熟每一段應有的句型句式,再係內容個度入手去唸點寫.

呢啲文第一段當然係介紹議題:

Recently, the number of cases concerning pet abuse has been rising at a staggering rate.

介紹議題咁好general咁講吓件事係咩,一般人有咩意見等等.

第二段是轉接段,告訴marker,我依家開始會寫兩至三個問題,或問題的原因等等:

There are a number of negative impacts associated with working late.

呢段可以好短, 一至兩句, 目的都係有個轉折.

好喇,第三段,或第三部分,就係入正題,講兩至三個論點,例如是問題,或好處/壞處:

For a start, drama allows us to apply theories we have learnt in lessons. 

呢部分要用一啲transition words, 第一第二第三云云. 另外,要用支持句去支撐論點.呢方面日後再詳細講.

第四部分,又係轉折,係告訴marker, 我講完啲問題喇,依家會講解決方法:

The above abuse imposes an inhumane condition on the pets. Concrete actions have to be taken to halt this sprawling problem to ensure the welfare of our precious animals.

如第二部分, 第四部分不用長, 一句起兩句止.

第五部分便是戲肉, 提出解決困難的方法. 解決問題的方法其實識吹就得,你又唔係特首,吹完做唔到都無後果.但大前提當然係make sense
啦:

Workshops and talks can be organised to articulate the importance of taking good care of pets.

Laws should be tightened to regulate the pet owners. 

Stricter legistlations should be passed to offer better protection of the pets.

嚟到最後,當然係結尾了. 簡單嚟講, 都係要表示,小第提出的解決方法, 必定解決到問題, 前途一片光明:

With the efforts of your association and the above suggestions, I look forward to the pet abuse problem being improved in due course.

I am sure with the above means, we would be able to fight against depression and stay mentally healthy. 

以上係寫論說文基本框架, 大家要記熟. 至於句型, 上面都提過少少, 都係參考吓坊間一啲範文, 重點係要記住每一段要表達出咩感覺. 詳細我會再提供多啲句型俾大家.