In response to the long-term measures recommended by the School Board, the then Principal initiated the Pledge Day on “Clean LA", to encourage all schools to make the “Clean LA” commitment on that day.
I wonder if it sounds better to replace the to-infinitive clause with a participle clause:
In response to the long-term measures recommended by the School Board, the then Principal initiated the Pledge Day on “Clean LA", encouraging all schools to make the “Clean LA” commitment on that day.
because I think it is seldom to use to-infinitive clauses after a comma.
我覺得個答案幾好。原來to-infinitive詞組與分詞詞組,有一點點微秒的分別。
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