"Your teacher has asked you to write an article for the school newspaper telling new students about the clubs/activities at your school."
題目俾了一個mind map, 提示學生要寫什麼,包括不同的club的名, 佢地的information, 和參加的理由.
普通的學生都如此分段: 首先: 寫不同club的名, 跟著介紹它們的information,最後鼓勵同學參加. 例如以下的sample. 這個學生不單有三段, 還有頭尾的introduction和conclusion:
How much do you know about our school clubs and activities? Have you joined any of them? I am going to tell you more about our school clubs and activities.
Our school has many clubs and activities such as Drama Club, Music Club, Computer Club and Girl Guide. Most of our students can join them. However, there is a limit number of students for each club.
These clubs and activities usually take place in classrooms after school. Some of them may be held on Saturday. They will have a meeting once a week. Different clubs and activities have different teachers-in-charge.
You may ask why we have to join school clubs and activities. In fact, there are many advantages after joining these clubs. You may make more friends with the students from other classes as all the students can join them. You might also learn a lot of new things. Different clubs can teach you some particular knowledge and skills; for example, you may learn some music theory in the music club or you may learn some first-aid skill in the Girl Guide. Moreover, these clubs may organise a camp and you may learn some knowledge that cannot be learnt in the lessons. It is a very special chance.
After reading this article, you may consider deeply and join school clubs and activities. There are only benefits for you.
弱的學生會唔識用mind map去organise. 會咁樣寫:
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