should pseudo-models be banned from appearing from the HKBF?

剛剛與學生作了條題目: should pseudo-models be banned from appearing from the HKBF?


agree


three reasons: 
1st: Their books are of low reading value. They are not books in some sense. 
2nd: People go there to visit the models but not buy books. The mission of the book fair, which is to promote the reading culture, cannot be achieved. 
3rd: Their photo albums display their suggestive body gestures, portraying a wrong concept of sex and women. 


language mistakes:
1. cannot use the relative pronoun such as "which"
2. lack vocab, as they used simple words such as "make", "affect" a lot
3. spelling mistakes such as "post" for "pose"
4. grammar mistake. For example, they miss "should" in the sentence such as "I agree that the pseudo models be banned from the HKBF."
5. use words wrongly. For example, they like to say, "The book fair appeared the pseudo models."